Fighting for Survival

This is one of the characters in a manga I'm working on. He's tired, there is a thunderstorm, an entire capital region is in flames, and he is fighting enemies on two sides. I had crappy sketching ability when I did this and put as much detail as possible so it took me 16 hours to finish.

I have a lot of work to do to make this manga a reality, many character designs to do and a lot of scriptwriting to finish (this is an epic that follows a group of children into adulthood so it's looooooooong). The good news is the first chapter of the manga will be available sometime in the future (don't know when) and online (don't know where) lol. The title is a secret until I can get that thing trademarked because nobody else has it. Oh and I'm never done learning so I'm wide open to suggestions on how to improve my work. I want to be one of the greatest American manga artists, I have some great stories to tell.